I just need to have someone proof read my essay.
In the first paragraph I am trying to summarize the two articles I am using. In the second paragraph I tried to challenge one article with other. in the third paragraph I tried to prove that both article are right and they are put together it would be a stronger argument.
Please feel free to add anything you want. all the arguments should be based from the articles.
I need to make sure that the grammar , ponctuation and spelling is correct.