Mass Communication Theories and the Social Media Era

I have theory paper with feedback from the professor. I want you to read the professor’s comments and rewrite the paper again and the title. please follow the professor’s comments. I uploaded the first draft and the feedback. Also, the chapter which the professor ask me to read. please, I need the paper more than 20 pages. please I need a real change because I changed a lot and it was his response (The abstract and the first few pages of your manuscript does not reveal that you have made any significant change to the manuscript. I have written feedback on your initial submission, which you ignored.) pleas using your own words ( zero plagiarism) The class is I have theory paper with feedback from the professor. I want you to read the professor’s comments and rewrite the paper again and the title. please follow the professor’s comments. I uploaded the first draft and the feedback. Also, the chapter which the professor ask me to read. please, I need the paper more than 20 pages. please I need a real change because I changed a lot and it was his response (The abstract and the first few pages of your manuscript does not reveal that you have made any significant change to the manuscript. I have written feedback on your initial submission, which you ignored.) pleas using your own words ( zero plagiarism) The class is Theory of Mass Communication Class. Master’s

This some the professor’s comments about the first draft
I have briefly glanced over your paper. I commend you for devoting many pages to this topic. But the current versions suffers from the following:

· Incoherence of thoughts. Through the paper, sentences and paragraphs are disconnected from one another so that the argument is made is curvilinear, rather than straightforward.
· Lack of clarity of purpose. It is not clear what the paper aims to discuss. Are you developing a new theory? If so, why a new theory needed? Or are you making an argument that social media should be considered the most important communication in the world?
· Organization. The current organization does not go justice to the argument. The paper reads like a literature review in most places, as opposed to a coherent argument espousing a point of view.

These are my initial thoughts. Master’s

This some the professor’s comments about the first draft
I have briefly glanced over your paper. I commend you for devoting many pages to this topic. But the current versions suffers from the following:

· Incoherence of thoughts. Through the paper, sentences and paragraphs are disconnected from one another so that the argument is made is curvilinear, rather than straightforward.
· Lack of clarity of purpose. It is not clear what the paper aims to discuss. Are you developing a new theory? If so, why a new theory needed? Or are you making an argument that social media should be considered the most important communication in the world?
· Organization. The current organization does not go justice to the argument. The paper reads like a literature review in most places, as opposed to a coherent argument espousing a point of view.
These are my initial thoughts.

 
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